Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBA] A comment on doc. 11-19-1052r0

["Huang, Po-kai" <po-kai.huang@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Yunsong,

 

              Thanks for the feedback. I think your suggestion is fine.

 

I do have a firm instruction below J, but I will update the document based on your suggestion and submit a revision.

TGba editor: Search through the spec for “the value of” and see if it complies with the following style guide line(#3144)

The use of “value of <field> field” is deprecated.[1]   So the following should not be used:

A STA that received an MPDU with the value of the Retry subfield of the Frame Control field equal to 1 shall determine if the MPDU is a duplicate using the duplicate cache.

 

 

Best,

Po-Kai

 

From: Yunsong Yang [mailto:yangyunsong@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Monday, July 08, 2019 9:56 AM
To: stds-802-11-tgba@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx; Huang, Po-kai <po-kai.huang@xxxxxxxxx>
Subject: A comment on doc. 11-19-1052r0

 

Hi Po-kai,

Thank you for preparing doc. 11-19-1052r0 and proposing resolutions in it. I have a comment on your proposed resolution to CID 3144, as attached, for your considerations. Thank you.

Best regards,

Yunsong Yang

Futurewei Technologies

10180 Telesis Court, STE 400

San Diego, CA 92121

Phone: +1-858-754-3638

 

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