[STDS-802-11-TGM] REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc

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Hello Dorothy and All,

A revised document for REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc was uploaded, see

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/20/11-20-0010-03-000m-revmd-sa1-comments-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls

Doc 20/0010r3 includes three “ready for motion” tabs:

Tab “Motion-EDITOR-P”, was originally included in 20/0010r1 with proposed resolutions for 81 comments.
Tab “Motion-EDITOR-Q”, 5 additional trivial editorial comments.
Tab “Motion-EDITOR-R”, a new tab with 3 editorial comments reviewed in PM1 on Wednesday.

It was planned to have a motion to approve those 89 comments on Thursday.

Please review and let me know if you have any additional suggestions to the proposed resolutions.

Regards,

Emily Qi

From: Qi, Emily H <emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Monday, January 13, 2020 11:08 PM
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Subject: RE: REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc - 20/0010r0

Hello Dorothy and All

A revised document for REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc was uploaded, see

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/20/11-20-0010-02-000m-revmd-sa1-comments-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls

Doc 20/0010r2 includes two “ready for motion” tabs:

Tab “Motion-EDITOR-P”, was originally included in 20/0010r1 with proposed resolutions for 81 comments.
Tab “Motion-EDITOR-Q”, a new tab with 5 additional trivial editorial comments.

It was planned to have a motion to approve those 86 comments this week.

Please review and let me know if you have any additional suggestions to the proposed resolutions.

Regards,

Emily Qi

From: ***** 802.11 REVm - Revision Maintainance List ***** <STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxx> On Behalf Of Qi, Emily H
Sent: Monday, January 13, 2020 10:49 AM
To: STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc - 20/0010r0

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Hello Dorothy and all

A revised document for REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc was uploaded, see

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/20/11-20-0010-01-000m-revmd-sa1-comments-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls

doc 20/0010r1 incorporated feedback from Mark Rison, with following updates:

CID 4055: added a note to editor that the "x" needs to be a multiplication glyph
CID 4117: change to “Discuss”. (removed from the motion-editor-P).
CID 4140: Change the Resn Status from “V” to “A”.
CID 4175/4176: Changed from “papameter” to “parameter”.
CID 4197: change from Revised to Accepted. Added a note to the editor for the locations.
CID 4415: Change from Revised to Accepted.
CID 4468: Change from Revised to Accepted.
CID 4470: Change from Revised to Accepted. Added a note to the editor for the locations.
CID 4533: Need a submission. Removed from the Motion-Editor-P tab.
CID 4601: change to “Discuss”, removed from the motion list.
CID 4624: Change to Discuss, and assigned to Mark Rison.

Now, 81 comments are included in the tab “Motion-EDITOR-P”. It was planned to have a motion to approve those 81 comments this week.

Please review and let me know if you have any additional suggestions to the proposed resolutions.

Regards,

Emily Qi

From: ***** 802.11 REVm - Revision Maintainance List ***** <STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxx> On Behalf Of Qi, Emily H
Sent: Wednesday, January 08, 2020 4:13 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc - 20/0010r0

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Hello Dorothy and All,

I have uploaded 20/0010r0 to the mentor:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/20/11-20-0010-00-000m-revmd-sa1-comments-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls

In doc 20/0010r0, tab “Motion-EDITOR-P” includes proposed resolutions for 85 trivial editorial comments for the Editor Ad hoc.

Please review and let me know if you have any suggestions to the proposed resolutions.

Regards,

Emily Qi

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[STDS-802-11-TGM] REVmd SA1 comments for Editor Ad hoc - 20/0010r3