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[STDS-802-11-TGM] Updated REVme EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet 21/0738r5



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Hello Mike and All,

 

EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet have been uploaded, see:  https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0738-05-000m-revme-wg-cc35-editor1-ad-hoc-comments.xlsx

 

The following resolutions, from the “MOTION-EDITOR1-E” tab, are due to be motioned during Monday’s TGme session.

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9.4.2.30

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The frame classifier field description in this clause describing the TCLAS element is confusing since fields/subfields of various classifier types are mixed up.

Organizing the descriptions in the order of fields/subfields of the frame classifier field sequentially for each classifier type (or groups of classifier types where the description applies to a group of classifier types) make the description easy to follow.

REJECTED (ED1: 2021-09-14 20:28:24Z)

Reject Reason: the comment was withdrawn by the commenter.

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173.00

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3.2

V

The phrasing of the definitions that reference optional items, changes throughout section 3.2. The initial definitions have the format "...a X, a Y or a Z", but this then changes to "...a X, or a Y or a Z" for some of the others. This should be consistent, as it becomes confusing for the longer lists.

Change the cited sentence to "A 40 MHz high-throughput (HT) PPDU (TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to HT_CBW40), a 40 MHz non-HT duplicate PPDU
(TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to NON_HT_CBW40 or TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to CBW40), or a 40 MHz very high throughput (VHT) PPDU (TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to CBW40)". In other words remove the 2nd "or" from the sentence as it's not required.

REVISED (ED1: 2021-09-13 16:12:45Z) Incorporate the changes in 11-21/799r1 <https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0799-01-000m-proposed-comment-resolution-for-cid-575.docx>.

 

Regards,

Emily


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