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--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Working Group Reflector --- Hi Amelia and all, The current version looks great. I have made some suggested edits (attached). Please feel free to accept or reject any and all. Regards, Vijay -----Original Message----- From: Amelia Andersdotter <amelia.ieee@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Wednesday, January 25, 2023 6:41 AM To: STDS-802-11@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [STDS-802-11] IEEE 802.18 ISUS ad-hoc latest (much shortened) draft position statement --- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Working Group Reflector --- Dear all, Last week in the Interim Session, IEEE 802.18 considered the draft position statement from the IEEE 802.18 ISUS ad-hoc group. After many contributions from a large set of individuals (thank you!) we were able to get a crisper, more encompassing document. We also reviewed a clean version of the draft, but were not able to motion the document for EC approval within our meeting slot. However, only final editorials remain. I've uploaded a much shortened draft position statement on the IEEE 802.18 mentor here: https://mentor.ieee.org/802.18/dcn/23/18-23-0015-01-ISUS-isus-clean-version-of-spectrum-statement.docx You can follow revision history in the abstract and through track-changes. For many contributors, it may feel as if your points were lost or cut half-way - I've tried to preserve the gist of any contribution. I hope this gives enough opportunity to review the document before Friday 12 ET, when we are now targetting holding the last ISUS call. On Friday's teleconference call, where we hope to finalize this document for IEEE 802.18 approval, the main focus will be any way to make the statement even shorter. The 2018 statement was only 2 pages long - our new version is 2,5 pages (excluding boilerplate). Adjectives, adverbs and superlatives are charachter hogs I could imagine dropping in more places. If you are not able to attend Friday's teleconference call, you can still drop me an e-mail offline or attend the weekly teleconference call of IEEE 802.18 next week, where we expect to consider the document one final time. Looking forward to hearing from you! Best regards, -- ^\...~...~...~...~...~.../^ Amelia Andersdotter ^\...~...~...~...~...~.../^ _______________________________________________________________________________ If you wish to be removed from this reflector, do not send your request to this reflector - it will have no effect. Instead, go to http://listserv.ieee.org/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=STDS-802-11 and then press the LEAVE button. If there is no LEAVE button here, try http://listserv.ieee.org/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=STDS-802-11-RO. Further information can be found at: http://www.ieee802.org/11/Email_Subscribe.html _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ If you wish to be removed from this reflector, do not send your request to this reflector - it will have no effect. Instead, go to http://listserv.ieee.org/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=STDS-802-11 and then press the LEAVE button. If there is no LEAVE button here, try http://listserv.ieee.org/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=STDS-802-11-RO. Further information can be found at: http://www.ieee802.org/11/Email_Subscribe.html _______________________________________________________________________________
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