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stds-802-16: SYSREQ COMMENT




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Roger

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Global replacement of "802.16" with "802.16.1".

[Reason for Edit]
For consistency with the new PAR number (802.16.1) to refer to the 
Air Interface standard.


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[Submitter's First Name]
Roger

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grammar, etc.]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
In Figure 1-1, delete "LMDS".

[Reason for Edit]
The term "LMDS" is used nowhere else in the document (except in the 
references). It is not defined, it does not add value, and it 
detracts from the global nature of the result since it is often 
associated with one particular nation.