stds-802-16: SUB11 COMMENT: Functional Requirements Document of June 23

[Adi Nativ <adi_nativ@radwin.com>]

All comments refer to last draft version, published on June 23, 2000 of
Functional Requirements for the 802.16.3
(referred also as:http://ieee802.org/16/sub11/docs/802163-00_02r2.pdf)

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Erase one of two dots after "locations".

[Reason for Edit]
typing error, one dot too much.


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[Reason for Edit]
Title should be attached to the figure.

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete: "packet-based"

[Reason for Edit]
To allow support of non packet-based services in addition to pocket based.

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Define the range instead of stating: "the above range".

[Reason for Edit]
No range is mentioned "above" in that section.

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete sentence: "The access transport will ... recovered from the packets".


[Reason for Edit]
To allow non-packet based services in addition.


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Change first sentence in 5.7 to the following: "802.16.3 system was defined
in section 2 to consist of one base station.
A 802.16.3 system capacity is therefore defined as the product of the number
of sectors per base station and a sector capacity.
A sector capacity requirement is defined as the product of two factors: the
"modulation-gain" factor and the "sector-bandwidth".
The "modulation-gain" is defined as the sector's aggregate bit rate devided
by the bandwidth, depending mainly on the type of modulation in use.
The "sector-bandwidth" is defined as the total frequency band available for
the BWA service, devided by the frequency re-use factor. 
This reflects mainly the factor of frequency reallocation and the ability to
optimize frequency useage."

[Reason for Edit]
Capacity issues should consider matters such as modulation type and
frequency reuse factor.