stds-802-16: TG1 Comments

[Jim Mollenauer <jmollenauer@TechnicalStrategy.com>]

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Mollenauer

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Jim

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change acronym for Convergence Sublayer to CS from CL, here and wherever
else used.  Also change definition of CS from Convergence Subprocess to
Convergence Sublayer

[Reason for Edit]
Consistency of usage


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
The fields mentioned in the text (line 59) are not indicated here.

[Reason for Edit]
TLV description does not match the text description.

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Mollenauer

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Jim

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete this sentence.

[Reason for Edit]
The use of the CRC is explained more fully on page 59, line 27.


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete sentence starting with "On detecting..."

[Reason for Edit]
There is no BWA PID; this is a DOCSIS holdover.  Also, we don't use
H.222.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Mollenauer

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Jim

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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.;
(G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
insert "byte" before "containing"

[Reason for Edit]
To correct a typo.