[RPRWG] Comment Resolution on T&Ds

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#11 - I propose changing the resolution to “allows stations to communicate”

#12 I propose you delete the word “time” from the proposed rewording so it becomes “The difference between…”

#20 – Class of Service can refer to more than delivery priority. I agree with Leon’s comment and disagree with your apparent decision to not change the definition.

#21 – Your Proposed Accept does not state how you intend to change the definition since two choices were presented. I recommend leaving the definition and changing the term defined to the singular (one of the two choices proposed).

#22 – Please add to the proposed resolution “use the singular consistently throughout the definitions unless there is a compelling reason to use the plural form.” Adding that statement will clarify the reason for further changes not necessarily indicated in the comment resolutions so far.

#37 and #39– Please state which proposed resolution you intend to apply to each of these comments.

#43 – please clarify. You state “replace transmission …” but the word transmission does not appear in the definition. Please clarify what your proposed replacement text is.

#48 – My vote is to leave it “media”, not “medium” (in response to the question at the end of your proposed resolution).

#71 – Once you have deleted the word “successfully” then there is no need for the last sentence of the definition, which should now also be deleted.

#144 – You indicate that you will use the term “Service Class” but its definition is not contained in the Terms and Definitions. Please state what that definition is.

#162 – The proposed resolution was accept. However, you have not supplied the clause for “source stripping”. Please do so.

#166 – Please state explicitly what changes you will make to the T&Ds based on this comment resolution. I can’t tell.

#170 – I think Mike Takefman’s words are good ones and should be appended to the definition.

#194 – after making the change indicate the reference definition has been modified.

#203 – Also change the term defined to the singular, and drop “is” from “…is received”.

#229 – I request you avoid use of the acronym SDU and spell out the term.

#231 – This comment was rejected because no remedy was specified. Not so: “Delete the phrase” was offered as one remedy. If you don’t like that remedy, state why not. I offer “A loose definition of LAN is intended here. The present definition accomplishes that purpose.”

#238 – change “single staion or medium failure” to “media or single station failure.” The sentence should make clear that more than a single fiber strand could be cut. For example, there could be a cable cut, severing both ringlets.

#241 – Please explain why 802.3 was added to this definition.

#1001 – Please clarify what specific change you are proposing.