Re: [802.21] Request for IETF MIPSHOP charter review
My comments on MIPSHOP charter are below.
Technical:
"
(5) Work on areas of mutual interest to IEEE 802.21 and MIPSHOP:
- Produce the required protocol enhancements or specifications for
IP-based support of Media-Independent Information, Command and Event
Services.
- Documents: draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-info-elements-XX.txt (transport of
802.21 information elements over IP),
draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-support-XX.txt (transport of 802.21 services
over IP, including security aspects)
"
What is the difference between "transport of 802.21 information
elements over IP" and "transport of 802.21 services"? The latter
transport seems to cover the former. Please clarify.
Does draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-info-elements-XX.txt include definition of
higher-layer information elements? If the answer is yes, the charter
should explicitly state so.
Do these two documents only contain solutions part? If the answer is
yes, the WG should also work on separate document(s) for problem
statement and requirements used as the basis for developing the
solutions. If the answer is no, the charter should explicitly state
that problem statement and requirements are part of one or both of the
documents.
Editorial:
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A liaison with IEEE 802.21 has been established, and access to the
IEEE 802.21 drafts is granted to mipshop members. Interested members
need to send a request to the WG chairs in order to obtain a copy of
the current IEEE 802.11 draft.
"
s/802.11 draft/802.21 draft/
"
JAN 06 Submit draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-info-elements-XX.txt to IESG for
publication as Proposed Standard
"
s/JAN 06/JAN 07/
Regards,
Yoshihiro Ohba
On Thu, Feb 23, 2006 at 05:22:48PM -0500, Yoshihiro Ohba wrote:
> (This email is being sent according to the consensus in today's
> teleconference on IS requirements ad-hoc.)
>
> Please review the proposed IETF MIPSHOP WG charter and send your
> comments to the 802.21 reflector by Feb 27 (Mon) midnight. I will
> consolidate the comments and send them to the IETF as part of IETF
> liaison process.
>
> The proposed charter is available at:
> http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/mipshop/current/msg02413.html
>
> Best regards,
> Yoshihiro Ohba
>
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