Re: 802 Position Statement on ISTO -Draft
At 11:47 14/07/00 -0500, Jim Carlo wrote:
>Below is position statement on ISTO that I edited per directions and worked
>with Roger Marks on. I will send final copy of this statement out on Monday
>Jim Carlo(email@example.com) Cellular:1-214-693-1776 Voice&Fax:1-214-853-5274
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>Chair, IEEE802 LAN/MAN Standards Committee
In the first Bullet 1), the last line - "Nowhere does the announcement
state the difference between this forum and an authentic IEEE Standard." -
seems to equate two rather different types of object, namely a forum and a
standard. Suggest the following alternative wording:
"Nowhere does the announcement state the difference between a specification
that may be produced by this forum and an authentic IEEE Standard."
Otherwise, looks to me like a good re-wording of the document.