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G'day Bob You win the prize for finding all the editorial errors I put in the document on purpose. ;) More seriously, I believe that all the issues you found were of a minor editorial nature. I have fixed all of them in v8 of the document (attached). Hopefully these changes will not cause any difficulties in the approval of the motion. Andrew BTW The 802.11 WG had a straw poll on this submission today. I do not recall the exact result (Stuart) but I believe it was unanimous -----Original Message----- From: owner-stds-802-sec@IEEE.ORG [mailto:owner-stds-802-sec@IEEE.ORG] On Behalf Of Grow, Bob Sent: Wednesday, 20 September 2006 12:11 PM To: Paul Nikolich; STDS-802-SEC@listserv.ieee.org Subject: [802SEC] RE: [802SEC] +++EC Email ballot (closes no later than 25SEP2006)+++ Motion to approve the attached EC SC6 recommendation Approve with authorization for any of the following (and other possible) editorial corrections 1. p.8, -- IEE 802 should be IEEE 802, IEEE SA is typically hyphenated as IEEE-SA (search for all). 2. p.14, right side, third bullet -- shouldn't "vote" be "comment", this is the only thing I could find about the agreement granting any vote in 802 process and therefore is probably an "oops". If I am wrong, please explain. 3. p. 15, general search -- eg should be e.g. unless British eg is correct per British English (I'm comfortable with British spelling, possibly check with a British dictionary are correct if inconsistent). 4. p. 17, right column third major bullet -- grammar problem, delete first "exercising". 5. p. 19, right column, third bullet -- change "version of an 802.x standard" to "version of a modified 802.x standard" --Bob Grow -----Original Message----- From: ***** IEEE 802 Executive Committee List ***** [mailto:STDS-802-SEC@ieee.org] On Behalf Of Paul Nikolich Sent: Tuesday, September 19, 2006 4:23 PM To: STDS-802-SEC@listserv.ieee.org Subject: [802SEC] +++EC Email ballot (closes no later than 25SEP2006)+++ Motion to approve the attached EC SC6 recommendation Dear EC Members, A revised version of the IEEE 802 recommendation on the 8802-1 and related documents requested by SC6 is attached for EC approval. Motion: The 802 LMSC EC resolves to adopt the attached SC6 recommendation version 07 dated 19SEP06 (appropriately edited to remove the "DRAFT" and "Change History" text.) Moved-Tony Jeffree Seconded-Mat Sherman Please cast your vote as soon as possible. The ballot closes the earlier of either 25 Sept 2006 or 24 hours after every EC member has cast a vote. Regards, --Paul Nikolich ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv. ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv. ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv.
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