Re: [802SEC] 802.1Qbh PAR comments
And again, this is an amendment; these words are not intented (or required)
to go in the standard.
On 15 March 2011 06:02, James P. K. Gilb <email@example.com> wrote:
> Section 5.2 Scope
> The scope uses text that speaks of the future, yet the scope will go into
> the finished standard and so should be written as past tense. Accordingly, I
> suggest the following changes:
> Change "is envisioned to support" to be "has been added to support"
> Change "It is expected that this amendment will result in the definition of
> a new device (a Port Extender) and optional augmentation ..." to be "This
> amendment has defined a new device, a Port Extender, and optional
> augmentation ..."
> James Gilb
> IEEE 802 LMSC Recording Secretary
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