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Hi Roger, Thank you very much for your comments. I have implemented all of them except placing the title in brackets, since Karen advised me that wasn't the correct style, and the changes to the quotes, other than the formatting changes. I do hope you consider this new version an improvement; I have attached it along with a diff to show the changes. Best regards, David -----Original Message----- From: Roger Marks [mailto:firstname.lastname@example.org] On Behalf Of Roger B. Marks Sent: 29 March 2011 20:34 To: Law, David Cc: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG Subject: Re: [802SEC] +++ 10-day EC Email Ballot +++ IEEE P802.3bg 40Gb/s single mode PMD approval press release David, I'll vote approve, but I think that it still needs quite of bit of editorial work. Here are some suggestions. Roger ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv.