Re: [802SEC] Precirculation of draft PAR and 5C for P802.1BR
Tony:
Comments on the PAR and 5C.
PAR
5.3 Grammar (suggest deleting "being").
5.5, 5.6 These seem to contradict each other, the Need citing provider bridges yet the Stakeholders being related to data center environments. The discussion of data center in the 5C indicates that the Need probably is wrong.
5C
4.a Grammar (suggest additions -> addition).
--Bob
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Subject: [802SEC] Precirculation of draft PAR and 5C for P802.1BR
EC Colleauges -
802.1 intends to submit the following draft PAR and 5C to the closing EC
meeting in July for approval to forward the PAR to NesCom:
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http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2011/new-pelissier-p802-1BRdraft-par-0511.pdf
http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2011/new-pelissier-p802-1BR-draft-5c-0511.pdf
*Regards,
Tony
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