Re: [802SEC] Call for Comments on 802.23 draft
Oops - didn't spot that the older version that you suggest doesn't have that
On 13 June 2011 13:31, Tony Jeffree <firstname.lastname@example.org> wrote:
> Geoff -
> I see that the Commentary download page has the following statement on it:
> "Notice: Commentary 2 is provided by the copyright owner solely for use by
> the IEEE 802.16 Working Group on Broadband Wireless Access."
> I therefore believe that your request that we make use of this tool is an
> encitement for us to breach Roger's copyright.
> On 13 June 2011 05:52, Geoff Thompson <email@example.com> wrote:
>> In my last e-mail to you (attached below) I announce the availability of
>> the first public version of the 802.23 draft. In that e-mail, I said that I
>> would formally solicit comments to be considered and incorporated into the
>> draft at our next meetings during the 802 Plenary Week in San Franciso the
>> week of July 17.
>> Please review the draft and record your comments using (the older version
>> of) the 802.16 commenting tool, "Commentary 1.55".
>> The tool does allow you to accumulate comments over multiple review
>> Commentary is a standalone application that has both MAC and PC versions.
>> Downloadable files are available at:
>> Please use "802.23 Ballot 1" as the fill-in for the field labeled "Letter
>> Ballot Number or Ballot Code"
>> Please mail the resulting comment file to me at:
>> With the subject line:
>> Comments on 802.23/D0.9
>> This is a 30 day comment period so please get your comments to me by
>> midnight, July 13 AoE
>> I will bring the assembled comments to the meeting
>> Comments are welcome from any interested or materially interested party.
>> If you have any question please get in touch with me directly
>> Best regards,
>> Geoff Thompson, 802.23 WG Chair
>> Subject: 802.23 Initial Public draft posted
>> Date: Tue, 24 May 2011 14:11:00 -0700
>> From: Geoff Thompson <firstname.lastname@example.org>
>> Reply-To: email@example.com
>> To: 802-23 Emergency Services <
>> CC: 802 EC <stds-802-sec@IEEE.ORG>
>> I am happy to report that 802.23 had a successful meeting in King of
>> Prussia, PA. Although we did not have any more attending the meeting
>> than normal, we had a very productive meeting with the help of Richard
>> Barnes who helped shake out out concepts with respect to operation and
>> inter-layer relationships. We reviewed my initial cut at a draft and
>> refined and simplified our concepts. In the time since the meeting we
>> have generated a new version of the draft which we are making available
>> for public review.
>> The draft is available at the following URL:
>> or alternatively at:
>> You may also retrieve the draft by going to the 802.23 document site
>> and selecting [Download] for 2011 DCN 13
>> We are happy to accept comments from all interested parties as Observer
>> comments. All comments will be considered.
>> I would appreciate your review.
>> I expect to post commenting tools and ask for formally submitted
>> comments to be submitted for review at our Working Group meeting
>> (Tues/Wed/Thurs AM) at the next 802 Plenary in San Francisco.
>> Best regards,
>> Geoffrey O. Thompson
>> Chair, IEEE 802.23 Emergency Services Working Group
>> GraCaSI Standards Advisors
>> 158 Paseo Ct.
>> Mountain View, CA 94043-5286
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