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Geoff - My comments attached. Regards, Tony On 13 June 2011 21:42, Geoff Thompson <thompson@ieee.org> wrote: > Colleagues- > > Roger Marks has very kindly granted permission to 802.23 to use the more > up-to-date version of his 802.16 "Commentary" balloting tool. > Ref: http://dot16.org/Commentary/ > If you have already downloaded the tool, please delete it and download > Commentary 2. If you have already generated some comments in the older > tool, please close out those and send them to me now and do the remainder of > your commenting in Commentary 2. > I have edited the message below (sent last night) to reflect this new > information. > > To comment open the .cmt file, select the "Personalize" option & fill in > Then select the "Comment" option and start your comments. > Thanks, Geoff > ================================================= > In my last e-mail to you (attached below) I announced the availability of > the first public version of the 802.23 draft. In that e-mail, I said that I > would formally solicit comments to be considered and incorporated into the > draft at our next meetings during the 802 Plenary Week in San Franciso the > week of July 17. > > Please review the draft and record your comments using the 802.16 > commenting tool, "Commentary 2". > The tool does allow you to accumulate comments over multiple review > sessions. > Commentary is a standalone application that has both MAC and PC versions. > Downloadable files are available at: > http://dot16.org/Commentary/ > > Please use "802.23 Ballot 1" as the fill-in for the field labeled "Letter > Ballot Number or Ballot Code" > Please mail the resulting comment file to me at: > thompson@ieee.org > With the subject line: > Comments on 802.23/D0.9 > This is a 30 day comment period so please get your comments to me by > midnight, July 13 AoE > I will bring the assembled comments to the meeting > Comments are welcome from any interested or materially interested party. > > If you have any question please get in touch with me directly > Best regards, > Geoff Thompson, 802.23 WG Chair > > ========================================= > Subject: 802.23 Initial Public draft posted > Date: Tue, 24 May 2011 14:11:00 -0700 > From: Geoff Thompson <thompson@ieee.org> > Reply-To: thompson@ieee.org > To: 802-23 Emergency Services < > STDS-802-23-emergencyservices@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG> > CC: 802 EC <stds-802-sec@IEEE.ORG> > > Colleagues- > > I am happy to report that 802.23 had a successful meeting in King of > Prussia, PA. Although we did not have any more attending the meeting > than normal, we had a very productive meeting with the help of Richard > Barnes who helped shake out out concepts with respect to operation and > inter-layer relationships. We reviewed my initial cut at a draft and > refined and simplified our concepts. In the time since the meeting we > have generated a new version of the draft which we are making available > for public review. > > The draft is available at the following URL: > > > https://mentor.ieee.org/802.23/dcn/11/23-11-0013-00-ESWG-draft-p802dot23-d0pt9-pdf-es-wg-draft.pdf > or alternatively at: > http://tinyurl.com/3lo9bc6 > You may also retrieve the draft by going to the 802.23 document site > https://mentor.ieee.org/802.23/documents > and selecting [Download] for 2011 DCN 13 > > Geoff > > We are happy to accept comments from all interested parties as Observer > comments. All comments will be considered. > I would appreciate your review. > > I expect to post commenting tools and ask for formally submitted > comments to be submitted for review at our Working Group meeting > (Tues/Wed/Thurs AM) at the next 802 Plenary in San Francisco. > http://ieee802.facetoface-events.com/session/70/page/index/id/index > http://ieee802.facetoface-events.com/files/sessions/70/announcement.pdf > > Best regards, > > Geoff > > Geoffrey O. Thompson > Chair, IEEE 802.23 Emergency Services Working Group > > GraCaSI Standards Advisors > 158 Paseo Ct. > Mountain View, CA 94043-5286 > <thompson@ieee.org> > > ---------- > This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This > list is maintained by Listserv. > ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv.
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