I don't think this release will serve your purposes.
It takes until line 28 before a reader hits any words that are of
interest to our constituency.
By that time the target editors will have already decided that they are
not interested in what seems to be the core subject of:
spectrum of "existing radars and 15 fixed satellite earth stations"
You need to LEAD OFF with what's important, new bands and new capacity
have been opened up for consumers to use and 802 is doing something
Something like: "IEEE 802 launches new standards project to
bring newly available spectrum to consumer fixed and mobile wireless
Please rewite and try again.
On 122//13 10:36 AM, Mody, Apurva (US SSA) wrote:
review the attached Draft Press Release on approval of the IEEE
802.22.1 Advanced Beaconing revision project by the IEEE SA NESCOM.
The press release has been reviewed by the IEEE Staff and received
approval from the 802.22 WG.
Please provide your comments by Monday, Feb 18th CoB at which point I
would like to start a 10 Day EC E-mail ballot to get the press release
Apurva N. Mody, Ph. D.
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