[802SEC] Response to 802.11 comments on PAR modification request for P802.1Qcd

[Pat Thaler <pthaler@BROADCOM.COM>]

Dear Colleagues,

 

The response to the 802.11 comments is:

·         Comment: 5.2b – this section does not read correctly.
The “Minor addition” seems like an
instruction or an informative word that should be removed.

·         Response: You are correct – it should have been written as a complete sentence. Add to the scope: This standard also specifies minor extensions and editorial corrections to the Application Priority TLV.

·         Comment: Are you changing the scope of the project as shown in both paragraphs in 5.2b?
Is the scope change just the addition of the new text . It seems to be a summary for the scope of the project (potentially) or if it is the incremental addition to the scope, then just rewrite the scope of the project as such.

·         Response: Yes we are changing the scope of the project. They changed the way the system generates a PAR modification. It used to show the old text on the left and the new text on the right with the changes highlighted. Now it shows the new scope in plain text on the left and change marked on the right so the contents of both boxes is the same.

 

·         Comment: 8.1 -- PAR modification form requires a statement of what and why (rationalization) the PAR is being changed be included in 8.1. Please add.

·         Response: Thank you for pointing that out since the small text below the 8.1 box was missed in editing the PAR form. Add to 8.1:
5.2b The PAR scope is being changed to include adding a value for the Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP) to the SEL field values table of the Application Priority VLAN TLV and making minor editorial changes to that TLV for better consistency.

The updated form is at:

http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2014/cd-thaler-Qcd-PAR-mod-0314-v02.pdf

 

Regards,

Pat

 

From: ***** IEEE 802 Executive Committee List ***** [mailto:STDS-802-SEC@ieee.org] On Behalf Of Tony Jeffree
Sent: Monday, March 17, 2014 5:39 PM
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Subject: [802SEC] PAR modification request for P802.1Qcd

 

EC Colleagues

 

802.1 will be requesting EC approval to forward a PAR modification for P802.1Qcd, to NesCom, as documented here:

 

http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2014/new-thaler-p802-1Qcd-par-modification-0314.pdf

 

Regards,
Tony

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