Re: [802SEC] 802.15 responses to PAR/CSD comments received

["James P. K. Gilb" <gilb@ieee.org>]

Bob

My I suggest the following simple edits to head off NesCom comments:

In 802.15.12 PAR, section 8.1

Change "IEEE Std 802-2014 (Overview and Architecture)" to be "IEEE Std 
802-2014: IEEE Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks: 
Overview and Architecture"

Also, in 8.1, delete the "()" surrounding the names of the standard.

Thanks for considering my comments for 802.15.4v, all of my concerns 
have been addressed.

James Gilb

On 03/16/2016 12:04 AM, Bob Heile wrote:
> Hi all-
>
> Attached are two ppt presentations detailing the responses to the
> comments received. For the most part we were able to accept everything.
> In a couple of cases we needed to balance comments received from two
> different sources and in one case MyProject does not give us access to
> do what was requested.  We appreciate your comments and feel they have
> helped us improve these documents. Please let me know if you have any
> questions or further comments.
>
> Updated PARs and CSDs below
>
> 15.4v pending projects
> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.15/dcn/16/15-16-0130-02-0000-p802-15-4v-par-regional-sub-ghz-draft.pdf
>
> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.15/dcn/16/15-16-0131-01-0000-15-4v-regional-sub-ghz-csd-draft.docx
>
>
> 15.12 pending projects
> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.15/dcn/15/15-15-0768-07-0llc-802-15-12-draft-csd.docx
>
> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.15/dcn/15/15-15-0760-08-0llc-802-15-12-par-draft.docx
>
>
> Regards
>
> Bob
>
> Bob Heile, Ph.D
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