Re: [802SEC] 802.15 Responses to Comments on 15.13 PAR (aka 15.11)/CSD
Thanks for your suggestions. I have taken all of them but left the RAC
acronyms unexpanded unless I get a comment from NesCom.
At 08:58 AM 3/16/2017 -0700, firstname.lastname@example.org wrote:
The PAR is much improved! (Though I'm not personally happy with all
responses, not sure what the reaction of others in 802.3 will be.
The new PAR has a few editorial things that if updated might avoid NesCom
5.2 -- Scope will be in the standard, and IEEE style is that five digit
numbers have the thousand separator being a space, not a comma (10 000
instead of 10,000). The proper abbreviation is Gb/s rather than
Gbits/s (also in Purpose).
5.4 -- This now is the first occurrence of RF. It is expanded in
5.5, but should be expanded on first use.
6.1.b -- Missing comma after CID. As RAC Chair, I'd support not
having to expand acronyms for RAC products, the Yes field is really a
note to the RAC and staff who won't be confused. Think about if you
want to fix now of only if NesCom members comment.
8.1 -- First use acronyms should be expanded: MIMO, IR, UV,
possibly WLAN (or replace WLAN with 802.11).
---- Bob Heile <email@example.com> wrote:
> Hi All
> Attached are 4 docs: the comment resolution PPT, the revised PAR and
> and a CSD redline. Please let me know if you have comments or
> Bob Heile, Ph.D
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