Short-list of items (mostly minor) to (possibly) fix in 802.1AEdk prior to WG ballot: 1. Performance requirements (see pg 26 line 1) not yet properly addressed. 2. Wordsmithing in the Abstract [Done]. 3. Check all external x-refs go to x-refs file. 4. Add an explanantion to Figure 13-1 about how objects are indexed, simiar to that in 1X Figure 13-1. Note that indexing currently inconsistent with !X. Objects should be indexed by Controlled Port/Private Port i.e. to expected route up the stack. 5. Is NOTE-2 on pg 77 correct? CEP not PEP? 6. Update years (anticipated standard, copyright etc.) 7. Preemptible -> preemptable. 2 place. [Done] 8. Fix presenttaion date with Janos. 9. Meeting timing for MPPDU transmission. State machine Figure 20-3. Possibly distinct extra state to show meeting transition timing? 10. Figure 20-6 needs name checking,. Also need explanation of when the ifPacketGroup statistics are present - Figure is too MIB centric. Same comment could apply to equivalent SecY figure. 11. YANG and MIB descriptions need cross-checking. Any object name changes? 12. PrY address needs to be particular to PrY, rename to 'pry-address' from 'if-address'. 13. Hexadecimal string representation of secy. 14. Maintenance items for Figure 13-1 correction and maintenance item against 1X for indexing (?), and for length of hex representation of SCI. 15. Timeout on reassembly needs to be property of all reassembly algorithms. Text in 20.13 as well as in 20.13.1. 16. Name and enum type for revealDE paramer,pg 105 line 45. 17. Editor's note at pg 118 line 29. Remove or relocate text. This is probably the wrong place in any case. 18. Text in 20.16 (pg 119 line 5) fully covered elsewhere. Just delete 20.16. 19. Change bars. With so much new text elsewhere these are probably not useful for WG ballot. Remove? Or just keep in hardly changed clauses? 20. Check terms in 17.4.2. 21. Filter pry-addresses if self configured to prevent inadvertent reception from wrong link. see 18.1. 22. Check for other missing x-refs (beginning '<') 23. Consistent character format for variables. Check clauses prior to clause 20. Use clause 20's character format.