Dear 802.11 Editors and 802.11be members,
As you may know, a Mandatory Draft Review (MDR) process is mandatorily required for 11be to enter the SA ballot stage.
If you are willing to volunteer to do the MDR with us, please let Robert, Alfred, and me know which of the following section(s) you can take care of by the end of Tuesday, 31 July 2023:
- Style Guide 2.1.1 – Frame Format Figures
- Style Guide 2.1.2 – Naming Frames
- Style Guide 2.2 – true/false
- Style Guide 2.3 – “is set to”
- Style Guide 2.4 – Information Elements/Subelements
- Style Guide 2.5 – Removal of functions and features
- Style Guide 2.6 – Capitalization
- Style Guide 2.7 – Terminology: frame vs packet vs PPDU vs MPDU
- Style Guide 2.8 – Use of verbs & problematic words
- Style Guide 2.9 – Numbers
- Style Guide 2.10 – Maths operators and relations
- Style Guide 2.11 – Hyphenation
- Style Guide 2.12 – References to SAP primitives
- Style Guide 2.13 – References to the contents of a field/subfield
- Style Guide 2.14 – MIB attributes
- Style Guide 2.15 – Hanging Paragraphs
- Style Guide 2.16 – Abbreviations
- Style Guide 2.17 – Format for code/pseudocode
- Style applicable to Definitions (Clause 3)
- Style applicable to General Description (Clause 4)
- Style applicable to Frame formats (Clause 9) – shall or may?
- Style applicable to SAP interfaces (Clause 6)
- Style applicable to New top level clauses
- Style applicable to Annex A – Bibliography
- Style applicable to Annex B – PICS
- ANA
- MIB
You would review the previous MDR reports of 11bc and 11bd to see how the MDR works.
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/22/11-22-0699-07-0000-tgbc-mdr-report.docxhttps://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/22/11-22-0021-15-0000-tgbd-mdr-report.docxAs for the timeline, we expect you to return your review findings to Robert, Alfred, and me by the end of Wednesday, 30 August 2023.
After that, Robert will chair an IEEE 802.11 Editors meeting with the purpose to review the 11be MDR findings. After the Editors meeting, I will then discuss with the task group on the 11be MDR findings with my recommendations (to accept or reject each of the findings) based on the feedback I receive from Editors.
Regards,
Edward
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