Hi Mark,
Thank you for reviewing the doc.
I have addressed all your comments, except for a couple of them which we can discuss during the next call.
Could you please take a look at the attached version and let me know if you have further comments?
Regards,
Abhi
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Thanks for this update, Abhi. I attach my comments.
Note I am concerned that change tracking has gone awry (I gave up
trying to find the divergences after a few) and some changes are
no longer shown, which of course is a big problem. I think some
kind of direct diff with D1.01 is going to be needed, to make sure
nothing gets lost.
Thanks,
Mark
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Hi Marc, Mark, Carol, All,
I have posted rev 2 of doc 11-21/90 to mentor:
- The baseline was updated to D1.01 and approved doc 11-21/0064r4
- The revised version addresses the feedback from Mark and Carol
- Resolves 10 additional CIDs some of which were affecting previously discussed resolutions
Could you please take a look at the doc and let me know if you have any feedback?
Regards,
Abhi
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Abhi,
we have not motioned the resolution so far. So maybe we can fix this grammar issue before we run the final motion?
Marc
> On 15 Jan 2021, at 21:00, Carol Ansley <carol@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> Page 10 – the Descriptions for ReplayProtection have a grammar problem in both tables.
> “Specifies the time and count of the EBCS UL frame is transmission”
> I’ll let you decide how you want to edit it.
>
> Regards,
> Carol
>
> From: Abhishek Patil <appatil@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Date: Thursday, January 14, 2021 at 8:14 PM
> To: Marc Emmelmann <marc.emmelmann@xxxxxx>,
m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx>, Jouni Malinen
<jouni@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Hitoshi MORIOKA <hmorioka@xxxxxxxxxxxx>,
Stephen McCann <stephen.mccann@xxxxxxxxxx>, Xiaofei Wang <xiaofei.wang@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>,
ANTONIO DE LA OLIVA DELGADO <aoliva@xxxxxxxxxx>,
bahareh.sadeghi@xxxxxxxxx <bahareh.sadeghi@xxxxxxxxx>,
George Cherian <gcherian@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Carol Ansley <carol@xxxxxxxxxx>
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> Subject: Doc 11-21/0090
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>
> Hi Marc, All,
>
> Thank you for the discussion this morning on doc 11-21/0090.
> I have posted a rev 1 with the changes we discussed during the call.
>
> Could you please take a look and let me know if you have additional feedback?
>
> Regards,
> Abhi
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