Thanks for this, Yajun.
If the resolution is ACCEPTED that's it. It can't be both
ACCEPTED and "incorporate changes tagged with <xxx> in this document".
1551 and 1553 don't have a clear proposed change, so should
be REVISED. However "in this document" doesn't work and needs
to be "in <this document>" since when this goes into the comment
database it needs to be updated to refer to the actual document,
e.g. 25/0571r1.
1550 has a clear proposed change but misses the article change so could be:
REVISED
In the cited sentence, change "A non-AP NPCA STA" to "An NPCS STA".
(The reviewer of proposed resolutions should not unnecessarily be
asked to consult some document, for a change that can be given
directly like this. So not "incorporate changes as shown in
xxx" for this one.)
1551 has a missing article in "indicate
NPCA primary channel" (both options),
and "of NPCA Operation Information field"
(option 1). Also "Option 1:
TGbn editor: please
insert the following paragraphs" is confusing because only one
paragraph is shown.
1553 has "[1553]An
NPCA AP shall set the NPCA Operation Information Present field to value 1 in its UHR Operation Parameters field to announce that it has enabled NPCA mode and value 0 otherwise."
but it's not clear which element these are in. Also "value" should be deleted (2x).
Thanks,
Mark
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Hi Alfred,
Could you please add the following CR document to the MAC agenda?
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11-25-0571-01-00bn-CR-MAC-CC50-CIDs 1550,1551 and 1553，Yajun Cheng (Xiaomi)
Best regards,
Yajun Cheng
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