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Hi Kerstin, Many thanks for careful review. I will update based on your comments.
Regards Guogang Huang 发件人: Kerstin Johnsson (Nokia) <kerstin.johnsson@xxxxxxxxx>
Hi Guohang, Just a few more fixes in the CRs for 1706.
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CID 19890
Top of page 3, “The Request No DL Draining field” ->
“Request No DL Draining
Period field”
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CID 19892
Bottom of p. 5, “Basic Multi-link element” → “Basic Multi-Link element.”
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CID 19893
Bottom p. 7, “Target AP MLD MAC Address field of the Basic Multi-link subelement” ->
“
Top of p. 8, “had accomplished the ST Preparation” ->
“
Top of p. 8, “had not accomplished” -> “
Top of p. 8, “Basic Multi-link element” → “Basic Multi-Link element.”
Bottom of p. 8, add a qualifier for the notification (current AP shouldn’t send the notification until it gets an ACK from the STA that it received the success
response, i.e. the STA is ready): “…may, only after successfully transmitting the corresponding ST execution response, inform…”
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CID 19901
Bottom p. 9, delete the parentheses,
"contains zero or one more Basic Multi-Link element
Bottom p. 9 in the table, “Basic Multi-Link” BR, Kerstin To unsubscribe from the STDS-802-11-TGBN list, click the following link: https://listserv.ieee.org/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=STDS-802-11-TGBN&A=1 |