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Thank you for comments. See my responses below. Regards, Emily Thanks for these, Emily. I have the following comments: CID 1092: I think we should reinstate the list. Otherwise the remaining sentence says nothing about the subclause topic, namely "Key management" EQè It may need more work. I will remove it from the “Review” list and mark it for “Discuss”. CID 1102: I agree with Mark H's counter (in this reflector) EQèagreed.
CID 1115: Need to fix also at 889.61 and 1917.12 and 1917.29 (also fix case) and 1918.16 (also fix case and change "indicator" to "subfield") EQè Agreed with additional change at 889.61. I am not sure about proposed changes at 1917.12/1917.29/1918.16. It may
need more work. I will remove this comment from the “Review” list and mark it for “Discuss”. CID 1122: Also at 4142.65 and 4142.38 EQèIt shall be CID 1222 (not 1122). I will add changes: at 4142.65: change “per sec” to “per second”. at 4142.38,
change “(1 sec)” to “(1 s)” . CID 1257: Is this really just an editorial? EQè I believe so. However if there is a doubt, I will remove it from the review and bring it to TG for discussion. CID 1301: At 996.29, "48-(MaxBSSID indicator field)" should be "(48 - MaxBSSID Indicator field)" and the hyphen should be a minus EQè I will add changes: at 996.29, change "48-(MaxBSSID indicator field)" to "(48 - MaxBSSID Indicator
field)" . Note that the hyphen should be a minus. At 1075.56, change "Max BSSID" to "MaxBSSID”. CID 1502: I agree with Mark H's counter (in this reflector) EQèAgreed.
CID 1582: Agree with Mark H that we need consistency for the NOTE in T21-1. But it adopt the proposed change, need to fix case of the "present" to "Present" in the resulting
"MU = present once […]" EQèI will incorporate Mark H’s counter proposal.
CID 1622: I agree with Mark H's counter (in this reflector) EQèagreed.
Thanks, Mark --
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Hello Dorothy and all, I have uploaded the following document with proposed comment resolutions for the EDITOR ad hoc:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/18/11-18-0657-00-000m-revmd-wg-lb232-comments-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls. 72 editorial comments are addressed in the tab “Review”. Please review and let me know if you have any question. I plan to have a motion to approve those comment resolutions (72 “easy” editorial comments) in the May IEEE meeting if there
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