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CID
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Commenter
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Clause
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Page
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Comment
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Proposed Change
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Resolution
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mgr comment
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2073
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Arik Klein
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4.3.25
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0.00
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Page 352, lines 8 through 45, is a self-contained approximately 38-line normative description of DMG STA PHY/MAC capabilities, but every line in that span is tagged under subclause
4.3.25 (Subscription service provider network (SSPN) interface). There is no '4.3.26 DMG STA' (or equivalent) heading anywhere in this span; the next actual subclause heading after this block is '4.3.26 DMG relay' (page 352, line 47). The DMG STA description
is therefore missing its own subclause heading and number, and is misattributed in its entirety to 4.3.25.
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Insert a new subclause heading and number (e.g., '4.3.26 DMG STA', renumbering the existing 4.3.26 DMG relay and subsequent subclauses accordingly) immediately before the DMG
STA description at page 352 line 8, so the description is no longer misattributed to 4.3.25.
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ACCEPTED
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Also need to delete the "DMG STA" at the end of the NOTE on line 5
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2333
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Liwen Chu
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12.5.5.7
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3538.33
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This paragraph clarifies that the protected Management/data frame and the A-MPDU subframe following it can't be the padding of the protected control frame. It is not clear whether
the MPDU delimiter of A-MPDU subframe carrying the protected management/data frame can be used as the padding of the protected control frame. It is not clear whether the same protected control frame (as 2nd frame) and its follwing A-MPDU subframes used for
the protected control frame befire it (as 1st frame). If this is the case the 2nd frame being the padding of 1st frame doesn't need to be mentioned since once 2nd frame's padding is satisfied, 1st frame's padding requirement is aumitically satisfied. If this
is not the case, the clarification test should be added.
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As in comment.
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REVISED
Revised. Incorporate the changes in https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/26/11-26-1633-10-000m-cr-for-control-frame-protection.docx for CID 2332.
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BTW, the font size is wrong for the paras at 3538.33/51
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2355
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Po-Kai Huang
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13.7.1
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3718.48
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The sentence says that the target FTR may delete the PTKSA, but in 13.5.3 and 13.5.2 for over the air and over the DS, we have the shall requriement to delete the PTKSA. "The
FTO and the target (#11be)FTR compute the PTK and PTKName using the PMK-R1, PMKR1Name,
ANonce, and SNonce, as specified in 12.7.1.6.5 (PTK). The PTKSA shall be deleted by the target FTR if it
does not receive a Reassociation Request frame from the FTO within the reassociation deadline timeout
value."
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change the may requirement to shall when the FTR does not recevie reassociation reqeust within the deadline.
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REVISED
At 3718.48, change "the target FTR may delete" to "the target FTR shall delete"At P3707 L49, P3710 L17, P3715 L37, P3718 L28, change "The PTKSA shall be deleted by the target FTR if it does not receive a Reassociation Request frame from the FTO within the reassociation
deadline timeout value." to "The target FTR deletes the PTKSA if it does not receive a Reassociation Request frame from the FTO within the reassociation deadline timeout value."
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the second set of changes has lost the "shall". Should be "The target FTE shall delete the PTKSA if…"
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2406
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John Coffey
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9.4.1.81.2.2
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1047.23
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"The number of receive chains is indicated by N_RX and the number of transmit chains is indicated by N_TX." Why is this text in 9.4.1.81.2.2? Neither N_RX nor N_TX is used in
this subclause. (They're used in 9.4.1.81.4.) The text looks as if it belongs in the previous subclause.
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Move "The number of receive chains is indicated by N_RX and the number of transmit chains is indicated by N_TX" to the end of subclause 9.4.1.81.2.1.
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REVISED
At the start of 9.4.1.81.2.2, add "The CSI is encoded for transmission as follows:"Move the sentence currently at the start of 9.4.1.81.2.2 to the end of the sentence at P1050.64, adding a ", where the".
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the moved sentence needs to start with a lowercase letter, obviously. Also need to reletter the items in the subclause
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2499
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Jeongki Kim
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35.11.2
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5643.53
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Change 35.11.2 to 35.11.1.7 because the SPATIAL_REUSE is one of the TXVECTOR parameters. Update the corresponding texts globally.
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As per comment
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ACCEPTED
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what does "Update the corresponding texts globally" mean?
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2500
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Jeongki Kim
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35.11.5
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5647.54
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Change 35.11.5 to 35.11.1.8 because the INACTIVE_SUBCHANNELS is one of the TXVECTOR parameters. Update the corresponding texts globally.
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As per comment
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ACCEPTED
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what does "Update the corresponding texts globally" mean?
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2587
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Mark RISON
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9.4.2.72
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1352.08
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The Multiple BSSID-Index element potentially contains DTIM period and count fields but they are in the opposite order to in the TIM element! This should be NOTEd to avoid interop
issues
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At the end of the NOTE at 1352.31 add "Note that the DTIM Period and DTIM Count fields are in the opposite order in the TIM element."
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ACCEPTED
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Actually the NOTE is about a third instance of a DTIM Count field, so instead the resolution should be to add another "NOTE 2---The DTIM Period and DTIM Count fields are in the
opposite order in the Multiple BSSID-Index element compared with the TIM element and the Per-STA Profile subelement of the Basic Multi-Link element."
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2694
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Mark Hamilton
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12.7.6.3
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3608.19
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"For MLO, if the non-AP MLD includes requested link(s) in the Basic Multi-Link element in the (Re)Association Request frame and the message 2 is used for the initial 4-way handshake,
validates that the affiliated STA MAC addresses are the same for each link included in the Multi-Link element in the (Re)Association Request frame." This sentence needs an actor noun (like the previous two sentences). Same thing in the next sentence.
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Insert "the Authenticator" before "validates". Same thing in the next sentence.
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ACCEPTED
Note to Editor: The two locations are 3608.19 and 3608.24.
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shouldn't this MLO text be a new list item 3)?
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