[STDS-802-11-TGAI] REVmc D7.0 updates done to TGai draft.
Dear all:
Lee has incorporated all required changes due to moving to REVmc D7.0.
In order to allow for people to review his work, Lee has produced a TGai D9.1 which is available in the members' area.
http://www.ieee802.org/11/private/Draft_Standards/11ai/index.html
Ping is already reviewing the document; despite I would like to ask one or two additional members who are willing to review
the document. In particular, Lee asked to verify the following:
* Please verify especially the numbering and corss-references.
* Clause 11.3.3 had lots of text from REVmc but as near as I could determine the only change is to the first paragraph so I deleted all the rest.
* Clause 11.3.4.1 does not appear to have any changes to REVmc so I deleted it.
* Clause 11.3.5.5, changes being made by TGai do not make sense for the last 2 sentences. Just what is being said by these changes that the original REVmc doesn't say?
* Clause 12.6.1.1.8 changes to the third from last sentence don't seem right after making the REVmc changes.
* Clause 12.6.14 is an example of places where we are making a change to one or two paragraphs out of many in the clause. In this case, I deleted everything after ".. are as follows:"
* Clause 12.7.1.7.1 added AKMs to what had been in REVmc but that part of the sentence was deleted in D7.0. Based on the new REVmc, I think we should delete our revisions, thus deleting this subclause from our draft.
Due to the timing constrains, I would appreciate if the "volunteers" could provide their feedback by tomorrow, Tuesday Aug. 23.
Best,
Marc
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