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Re: [802.3_4PPOE] cmjones TDL

1. Page 48 Line 18, change "FFFF" to "0xFFFF" to match the way you formed "0x88CC" in another fix.

2. Consider dropping the hJ and just use "tenth of kJ" like you did with "tenth of mA" earlier (hJ not as widely used, adds no additional value to the comment).

3. Watch out for periods at the end of each proposed change. Some do have period, some do not.

Other than that, looks good. Good improvements.


On Oct 21, 2016 8:30 AM, "Chad Jones (cmjones)" <cmjones@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
All, please find the resolution for my TDL attached. Recall that my AI was to find a resolution to the statement ‘decimal value of bits’ in 30 and 79. If you care about these sections, I would expect you to look at the attached and give feedback if you have any. It should only take 5 minutes of your time (unless you disagree and have to send me feedback…). I will be submitting this document as a remedy to one of my comments against D2.1.

Chad Jones
Tech Lead, Cisco Systems
Chair, IEEE P802.3bt 4PPoE Task Force