Dear Jay,
thank you for your efforts for addressing the editorial comments. After review, please find below some comments from my side for your consideration:
1.
Comment resolution for the CIDs 439, 440 and 542 is missing.
2.
CID 434: to be consistent shouldn’t the definition be set to lowercase letters (“ML-KEM
Module-Lattice-Based
Key-Encapsulation
Mechanism”)?
3.
Comment resolution for the CIDs 169, 205, 565, 721, 728: all 5 CIDs related to clause 10.28.15, page# 29, line# 36 were accepted but they result in different
options, see below. Please check which option you want to accept.
From:
To:
- Option 1: “A STA that sets Extended Length Element Support to 1
and encounters an unknown or reserved Extended Length Element ID shall ignore ...”
- Option 2: “A STA that sets Extended Length Element Support set to 1
that encounters an unknown or reserved ...”
- Option 3: “A STA
with Extended Length Element Support set to 1
that encounters an unknown or reserved ...”
In this context there is another CID 336 that was assigned to you and where it is proposed to add the word “field” in the concerned paragraph, see below. You may have
missed it.
|
336 |
Hyung-Nam Choi |
No |
10.28.15 |
29 |
36 |
E |
10.28.15 |
29,36 |
In the sentence the words "field", "and" are missing. |
Correct the sentence as follows: "A STA that sets Extended Length Element Support
field to 1 and encounters an unknown ..." |
BR
Hyung-Nam / Lenovo
From: Jay Yang <yang.zhijie@xxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Tuesday, September 15, 2026 11:06 AM
To: STDS-802-11-TGBT@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [External] [STDS-802-11-TGBT] LB297 CR for editorial comments on 802.11bt D1.0
Hi All,
The approximately 122 editorial comments assigned to me have been addressed in
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/26/11-26-1846-00-00bt-lb297-cr-for-editorial-comments.xlsx.
As usual, to save time, I do not plan to discuss them one by one during the session. Instead, I still count on members to review them offline.
Please take a look, and send me an email if any issues are found.
杨志杰10343608
Thanks
Best Regards
Jay Yang (杨志杰)
To unsubscribe from the STDS-802-11-TGBT list, click the following link:
https://listserv.ieee.org/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=STDS-802-11-TGBT&A=1
To unsubscribe from the STDS-802-11-TGBT list, click the following link: https://listserv.ieee.org/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=STDS-802-11-TGBT&A=1