Draft 2 of Press Release
Please find attached draft 1 and draft 2 of the press
release. I received comments and changes from Karen
Mccabe (the IEEE marketing manager) and several members
of the reflector. Karen will check it again on behalf
of the IEEE and I want to get the views of members.
I believe I took all advice save two: a question of style/
grammar on which I am trusting the majority for not suggesting
a change; a suggest to change the transfer rate to include a
low bounds. Since we were missing clear agreement on the
lower bound I wanted to avoid confusion.
Assuming I get no change suggestions by thursday that I want
to implement I will send this out for email ballot on friday
with a 1 week vote window. Please note if one votes "NO" it
is customer to suggest changes that would allow you to
vote "YES". I will refrain from making some lame florida joke.
cheers,
mike
802.17_rev2.doc
802.17_rev1.doc