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All, Thanks to those who responded, especially those with actual wording changes. I've captured the new wording in additional slides so everyone can see them in a common format. If there are additional comments, please feel free to make them. We'll need to choose between these, probably on Tuesday of next week, in order to allow this project to move forward. Thanks, Ben -----Original Message----- From: owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org [mailto:owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org] On Behalf Of Benjamin Brown Sent: Thursday, September 23, 2004 7:36 AM To: STDS-802-3-CM@listserv.ieee.org Subject: Re: [8023-CMSG] PAR proposal Brad, Gadi, Matt, Asif, Thanks for your review. I've captured Brad's suggested changes in the first 4 slides of the new attached proposal. I then added a 5th slide which is a markup of the 4th with my changes in response to some of Matt's comments. If everyone could take another look at this and let me know what they think of the new document, the proposed changes or anything else they can think of, I'd very much appreciate it. Regards, Ben Booth, Bradley wrote:Ben and all, Some feedback on this. Cheers, Brad -----Original Message----- From: owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org [mailto:owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org] On Behalf Of Benjamin Brown Sent: Wednesday, September 22, 2004 4:03 AM To: STDS-802-3-CM@listserv.ieee.org Subject: [8023-CMSG] PAR proposal All, This is not a full cut at the PAR but covers the more interesting pieces - Title, Scope, and Purpose. Please review and comment. Again, this, or something similar, needs to be approved in Ottawa next week in order to pre-circulate for approval at the WG level in San Antonio in November. Please give this serious attention and comment with actual suggested changes. Thanks, Ben -- ----------------------------------------- Benjamin Brown 178 Bear Hill Road Chichester, NH 03258 603-491-0296 - Cell 603-798-4115 - Office benjamin-dot-brown-at-ieee-dot-org (Will this cut down on my spam???) ------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------- Benjamin Brown 178 Bear Hill Road Chichester, NH 03258 603-491-0296 - Cell 603-798-4115 - Office benjamin-dot-brown-at-ieee-dot-org (Will this cut down on my spam???) ----------------------------------------- -- ----------------------------------------- Benjamin Brown 178 Bear Hill Road Chichester, NH 03258 603-491-0296 - Cell 603-798-4115 - Office benjamin-dot-brown-at-ieee-dot-org (Will this cut down on my spam???) ----------------------------------------- |